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Contest entry - rough

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I'm not at all happy with the way this came out. I still need to put the finishing touches on this and would be happy for any tips or suggestions people can throw at me. It's been frustrating! :(

Oh well I guess i can't win my own competition :P

I'll add the stock providers once i put up the entry. Not enough time atm.

Oh and in case you're wondering the sky and wings are fractals :D
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Shadow on her face, get rid of the outlines around her fingers or do something to make them less real (it looks like you've taken a picture and added stuff on/behind) If possible clean up her chin a bit 'cos it looks like she's got some stubble, and try throwing a bit of a shadow over it. The face looks rather red compared to the rest of her too. I think if you can get her to look a little less REAL, the picture as a whole will come together much better.